Heads You Lose
“Hope you were able to follow along without pictures.Dave Dave,My thoughts, in chronological order: 1. Fuck you. 2. Seriously, fuck you. 3. I wonder what John Vorhaus is up to these days. I never did call him. 4. What was I thinking collaborating with an unpublished, narcissistic poet? 5. We’ve sunk three months into this and there’s still a mystery to solve.I am reminded of that standoff during The Fop over whether Claude Hindenberg would smuggle the bomb in his tuxedo jacket or a loaf of pumpernickel. You conceded to my logic—who brings bread to a catered ball? But every scene you wrote after that featured a loaf of fresh pumpernickel. You’re wasting our time mocking me instead of getting the job done.I had always hoped this project would provide some kind of reparation for the slight you felt over that thing I did without you, but I have to question at what cost. I think we’ve sunk enough time into this project that it might be worth it to keep going, but you need to be on board wit...h that.If chapter 16 is replete with more Dick and Jane nonsense, then we’ll call it a day.MoreLess
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